I've started a website solely for publishing the stories I wrote. Actually, I only started writing the first proper story of my life (since you don't count the ones used in English composition assignments in school), and I've finished only the first chapter. However, I do want to know how others think it's going, so that I can make the story better as it goes on. Therefore I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at my story and tell me how it goes.
The story can be found HERE
Thank you :)